Tuesday, March 23, 2010


I got a really interesting comment on one of my poems:

"What a shitty poem. This is terrible. I've eaten alphabet soup and shat better than this."

I think he must get a book deal for his ass.

What do you guys think?



DPTH International said...

This guy just ripped off "Everybody Loves Raymond". I love these intellectual assessments of ones creative works.

Thanks for stopping by my blog. Unfortunately, I have been on a bit of a hiatus. I have to get back into more reviewing. I'm happy to introduce new and different bands to you.

It's lots of internet browsing that I waste time on wear I find these bands, as well as hours browsing through music shops.

Keep up the great work Etain!

Kate S said...

"I think he must get a book deal for his ass."


Some people are just talented like that. :-P

laughingwolf said...

it just smells, from every angle! GRR

Rick said...

He's putting you on. Zombies can't eat alphabet soup. No wonder he threw up!

And yes, keep up the great work. Ignore the little minds out there.

eric1313 said...

I was also going to say he ripped off Everybody Loves Raymond, but that has already been mentioned above.

In light of that, I'd reserve a word I rarely use for that person. That word is: Fucktard. Like he said, his own work is a pile of fecal matter, and that's the way he likes it. Tell him Bon Apatite!

Don't let them get to you. We're all learning every day.

Good to see you again, just making my rounds...

etain_lavena said...

Thanks for the comments guys. hahahaha, fuctard:) great to see everyone

Tony White said...

Hello my old friend,
The comment?
Sounds like projection to me


Steve Malley said...

Seems the others said it all for me... I'm one of those who likes your work! :)

the walking man said...

I think it is a pretty typical response from the "literary" crowd. Poets and writers can be a jealous and vengeful tribe. The commenter can eat the shit he shat and then shat out the shit he ate and no one will notice nor care about his shit.