Very immediate. One can feel the blood coursing through the body in this poem.
Nicely done, miss. Thank you!
nothing more powerful,than breaking the silence.
Kewl thanks Charles:)Thanks Steve:)truth in a few words, left freedom in ones soul, right walking man?
This stanza:I feel the minute.trapped in the now.nothing more powerful,than breaking the silence.Especially if that silence is mysterious and prolonged. Great poem. Powerful.
Thank you for reminding me that life is about poetry.
Thanks Cat:)Wow, Life thats a lovely compliment:)
Etain, I am of the mind that the fewer the words that need interpretation in the mind the sharper the point.
Etain Lavena,If I touched you, would you break my animal mind? :(
walking man,Well I guess its about less is more then:)Yes M@ I think I might be able to do that:)
etain, that's extremely powerful
Thank you Wolf:)
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