Wednesday, January 28, 2009


saw you,
in your mind.
afraid of your,

softly smiling.

tried to reach,
touch you.
you would have;
none of that.

closer I walked.
maybe just;
catch a whiff of you.

me so close,
made you scream out:


watching you,
as your eyes,
and your voice,
so deep.

anger, trapped in fear.

can I be so;
so disgusting.

calmly I look at you.
taking your scent in;
one last time.

I walk off,
with your bellowing voice,
stroking my hair.
breaking me.

all I wanted;
was to say:
I love your smile.


Catvibe said...

Oh that is just a relentless heartbreak. Such rejection is horribly painful. Beautifully written, very accessible.

etain_lavena said...

thank you Cat. :)

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

I do love your smile. :)



etain_lavena said...

ahhhhhh Rose how I missed you so:)

Charles Gramlich said...

"Breaking me." Very powerful

M@ said...

You probably wanted more than that and that's what scared him, though.

I liked the--I forget the proper term--meterology, scansion?

I loved it.

M@ said...

Etain Lavena.

Steve Malley said...

Ouch. We've all had those scenes...

the walking man said...

Whatever you did on your long break Etain it worked! You are definitely on a roll with the photo/poetry.

etain_lavena said...

Charles, I had that line diffrent and I changed it, and it so work:)
M@, happy you liked it and I will google that meterology, scansion,as I have no clue....:) and why do you always repeat my name, afraid you'll forget me.....not and easy task...hihihih:)
Steve, I made it all up who can resist me(look confident).....whahahaha....dreamworld:)

I found me Walking man, and I am loving it alllll so much...thanks:)

laughingwolf said...

nothing but a lot of pain here :(

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