This may be your best poem ever. Wow! Extremely good.
Boy troubles?Usually, I don't fall into the camp of rubes that praises any poem written by any jerk on the Internet. Wow, it rhymes!But this truly was my favorite of yours. I like it!
Some kind of perfectmet some kind of beautyall was left in some kind of hate.If only I had some kind of life.I really wanted this to readWhich is still some kind of life.or something along those lines :)Anyhow, this one is fackin excellent. I really really like this piece.
Dang it, Charles took what I was gonna say...Great stuff!
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I agree with Charles, Etain. This thing had precision all over it by the fifth line...
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