Sunday, December 30, 2007

My entire broken heart


you love me with your, heart,
the hole broken heart.
No wonder I slipped,
through the cracks.
you fall apart.
cause you can only take a part
of me.

did you not see how I tried?
wanted to tie your broken heart to mine.
you loved me,
with your entire broken heart.
I loved you with my heart,
but with the cracks,
everything seemed to fall apart.
no matter how hard,
I tried to tie you to me.
you loved me with your
entire broken heart.

Jy het my lief met jou,
hele gebroke hart.
dis geen wonder ek het gegly,
deur die krake.
jy breek in stukke,
want jy kon my net uit mekaar haal.

het jy nie gesien hoe ek probeer?
on jou gebroke hart aan myne vas te maak.
jy het my lief gehad
met jou hele gebroke hart.
ek het jou lief gehad met my hart,
maar die krake,
het als laat uit mekaar val.
maak nie saak hoe hard
ek probeer om jou aan my te verbind nie.
jy het my lief gehad
met jou hele gebroke hart.

6 comments:

Charles Gramlich said...

Sad.

M@ said...

Funny. I was just feeling down and I said to myself, "No, no, don't visit Etain Lavena's blog right now!"

:)

eric1313 said...

But very dedicated to love, even through the pain of a broken heart.

It's funny, we're on the same track. My poem today is about similar things. Similar but very different.

Happy new year, Etain! Have fun and celebrate, with your entire broken heart, OK?

Miladysa said...

Powerful poem!

Autonomous. said...

"you loved me,
with your entire broken heart"
.....beautiful!

Autonomous. said...

"you loved me,
with your entire broken heart"
....beautiful!