Wednesday, November 21, 2007

youth


Getting older,
is clay.
Over,
and
over.
mould into better,
nothing again.

touch sooner.
get the right,
shape;
then again.
over,
and
over.
mould me differently.

body not getting,
stronger,
more attractive.
just moulding.
over,
and
over.
till the shape fits in
then only is it left out, to stand out.

clay can never,
be sand again.
it is always left,
to be moulded.
till you find yourself;
in the state your in.

10 comments:

Charles Gramlich said...

Very good. Poignant. And a great pic to accompany the poem, as always.

Inconsequential said...

:)

M@ said...

Okay, I think you overuse the comma but I just noticed this is meant as "spoken word" so you want to really control the pace. Gotcha.

Brian said...

The key my sister is to left the molding be done by you, not by others.

etain_lavena said...

Thanks Charles":)
YES in:)
hihihi...thanks M@
Yes thats True Brian, but live molds even if you dont look at it:)

liam said...

this is a great. molding and reinventing is necessary, methinks.

eric1313 said...

"clay can never,
be sand again.
it is always left,
to be moulded.
till you find yourself;
in the state your in."

So strong and so true, Once something is beaten and pushed into shape, it is so often broke and useless afterward.

Strong writing, Etain. Glad to see it!

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very pretty photo

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