Sunday, October 21, 2007

fast


gou

genot,
tydlik
nat vel.
sweet.
tyd,
stadig.

leef,
leer.
begeer,
veraltyd.
rooi,
seer.
bloed.

gee,
genoeg.
glad nie.
ek
jy
niks.

trane,
passie.
dood.

fast

pleasure
timely
wet skin.
sweat.
time,
slowly.

live,
learn.
need,
always.
red,
pain.
blood.

give,
enough.
never.
me
you
nothing.

tears,
passion.
death.

8 comments:

Charles Gramlich said...

Good illustration of the power of individual words. Almost a lesson in resonance

etain_lavena said...

wowi thank you charles:)

the walking man said...

Try reading it without the pauses provided by the punctuation except the final period. leave the verse breaks though.

This in either case would work very well in front of an audience with a microphone in front of you.

Peace

mark

eric1313 said...

I loved it! This was a fast read, I had to read it twice because I didn't want it to end.

And Susan posted again. It's good to see her back. Thought I'd tell you.

Peace out, Etain.

M@ said...

I don't know. I like the first one better. hihihihihihi!

etain_lavena said...

me in front of ppl...I would rather chew my own arm off, walking man...hihihih;)

Yay for susan,.....and thanks:) take care.

whahahahahah.....thanks Matt...so insightful;)

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