Saturday, September 22, 2007

strong enough

no breathe to pass your lips.
no kiss to cure them.

I felt and said nothing,
you teached me words.
when I used them,
you did want them anymore.

left me alone,
to cry out to nothing.

because you need time,
you convinced me,
to love,
but now it's not allowed.

I will die softly waiting.
I belief in you.
confused words.

I can cry when your not watching.
I am strong for you.

softly wishing for my fate.
to be,
not to be.

Speak no word,
no breath to pass my lips.


Charles Gramlich said...

Wonderful, as always. This one is quite claustraphobic.

etain_lavena said...

Thanks Charles I think this must be how I am feeling:)

Wayne Allen Sallee said...

I agree with Charles about the smothering effect. I thought the last lines were kick down the door great.

etain_lavena said...

Thank you very much Wayne, :)

Nosjunkie said...


M@ said...

very nice, etain lavena.

Angela said...

That was good is that pic you?

etain_lavena said...

thank you m@:)
No angela I am in the sidebar, almost the same but not exactly:)