It would be nice to be able to hear these spoken, both in English and Afrikaans.
Thanks Capitan.....It would be great Charles:)
porno pic! yay...err...I mean, stunning words and beautiful image...Verbal porn! yay...:)Cool stuff Etain, so what is the last bit?feel ash ek of jolt how my heart delight you, enough are what ek soek forgets, still ash ek lê, for at becomes. Crack my of that beginning???hmmm, not too good at translation...
etain, I am curious about the writing process for you. Do you do these at one sitting? How much rewriting is there? How much consideration for form? What do you do with your poems..do you keep them for blogging or submit them? Just curious
whahahahaha...In a bit off.It means:feel when I shake, how my heart is shaken,enough is what I seek,while I lie,to be forgotten,break me in from the beggining.HUGZ IN:)Hey Stewart....for me, my poetry especialy, I put music on, sometimes the words intice me, or the beat move me. This was written on a song by NIN, it is also called closer and it is about the guy that want to basicly F%^&** like and animal...and well the beat always drives me bonkers.Yes mostly write in one sitting, rearely think of form, i let the poem decide the form....dont send them in, would love to but dont even know where to begin...please say why your curious?
Nice one!Now, if you'll excuse me, I need a glass of cold water...
You let me violate you You let me desecrate youYou let me penetrate you You let me complicate you :)kinda thought they lost it with tthe last bit though...Through every forest Above the treesWithin my stomach Scraped off my kneesI drink the honey, inside your hive...You are the reason I stay alive...well, maybe the honey bit is consistant, but it never seemed right to me...Still, NIN are cool, many times have i tried to break my neck to head like a hole!
Hmmm, I had meant my porn comments as humour, now I wonder just how close to the mark it was...
hihihihih....ja in they lost the plot in the end...I love that BEAT...drives me bonkers...hihihih...silly:)
have you seen the film type things they did?kinda cool/freaky...
Kiss him when you're sober.
I'm always curious about writing. I don't write poetry, just wondered how certain poets ply their craft.
ahhhhh no In I have not, will have to see if I can get it....whoohoo..freaky is good.No no Jr for once I am sober...hihihihih....OO ok Stewart....:)
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