Wednesday, June 13, 2007

The Coward

The Coward

I loved her,
He was my everything
Had to hurt her,
He had no choice this I know
I loved her,
I loved him
Had to make her cry,
Tears was all I needed
I loved her,
He was my everything
Had to leave her,
I only saw his back,
I loved her,
I loved him,
Couldn’t watch her die
My body will leave today
I love her still,
Without him I am lost,
It hurts me,
I saw his pain,
I love her still,
I will always be his
I cry,
his tears are black
I love her still,
I need him here
It breaks me,
Souls will cry
I love her still,
I love him always
I beg to die
Its over soon.


Charles Gramlich said...

This has a lot of immediacy. The interlocking of the various sentiments is powerful. Well done.

Inconsequential said...


nice piece.

Inconsequential said...

still good.

etain_lavena said...

thanks Charles and In:)

Susan Miller said...

Two parts but each seem so alone and full of fear of what that may mean. This is a beautiful and sad, almost frightening, look at what love is said to complete.

As always, you ROCK, etain!

Steve Malley said...

Abuser and abused, and the deadly love between them? Ver, ver nice...

And to think you can write like this in Afrikaans, too!

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