Tuesday, September 26, 2006

9


Opening up the wrist of love.
(Marra’s words my intentions hidden in the lines)

Arise, fair sun, and kill the envious moon.

The night is turning, over and over in his broken mind. The pale white of her skin the pain in her eyes. Her beauty spilt trough our hearts. Her frailty only timely seen.
She was the muse; she was perfection and infectious need. I would have died for her; I would have killed for her. The time we had was so slow so short; perfection will always be short lived. How would the hours pass us by if the minutes never arrived?
Her wrist opens in love, my need for her so painful, never ending, always haunting.

How oft, when men are at the point of death, Have they been merry! Which their keepers call A lightning before death.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Am I the only person that thinks this lady is boring? And that she has to learn how to spell? For Petes Sake!

Gremlin said...

Hay Buddie. I Think she's briliant.
Spelling uhmmm, Darn cant say mine are worse!

SaM-GiRL said...

Your last couple of pieces all seem like your writing from a "sad" place.....as though somebody has hurt you? are you ok? or am i just imagining shit again?

Mau said...

I think shes realy a talented writer, and hope her dreams come true. And anonymous, spelling??? thats the point of poetry, if u dont get it dont read it.

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Anonymous said...

Hmmmm...Thanks for your opinion. I think that you may have misjudged the idea of having your own blog. I understand that you might find her boring, the solid fart you think is brains give that away. But if you think back, you’d remember its freedom of speech. Your either the love-sick puppy with the 2 faced opinions, double standards and who has a nice girl but try to get numerous other MSN girls into his looser pants? If so…not going to mention a name, you’re sick! and is this the result coz she’s been avoiding your stalker ass? I guess you are the expert. Maybe some other jealous harlot put you up to this…either way…

And, it’s Shakespeare you twat. I think the spelling is meant that way if this ass (me) can remember correctly his stupid school years.

So the gap in your education is just as big as the one in your front teeth bloody hillbilly. Take your sister out for some hanky panky and leave educated people be.
Go and jump in front of a beer lorry and spare us the oxygen you plan to waste. Again thank you for the comment and please call again.

etain_lavena said...

Sam I am slightly in a different place, but its like the poet needs the pain, without it I am nothing.
I am perfect if not I will talk about it.
Anonymous: I will not insult you, but If I am so boring and if I lack spelling ability why do you even bother reading? I am sure you are the only person that think I am boring. For Pete sakes...shame...hihihih

Anonymous said...

I am, in FACT NOT, the only person that thinks you are boring, there are many.....some of the men you even call your friends.....Hush now..do not cry....they hate you... its no lie....

Gremlin said...

Well it doesn't look like you are a budie so I do take that back!!!!!

All ppl have the right of there oppinion. but you know what you are irretating me. She are a great person, and that I know. So for your buddies that don't like her, Well shame for them, they proberly got rejected by this magnifisant person.

Uhmmm proberly you to, shame man, but dont worry I'm sure you will find a person who will fit your discusting attetude. O yeah can you count?

Count all the spelling mistakes. It will keep you bussy.

pixxie said...

the one thing that has always amazed me is the poetic grasp that so many afrikaans people in our beautiful country of South Africa have. sure, there grammar and spelling may not be english genius, but they know enough to portray to the rest of us the colourful and vibrant thoughts of their mind. i'm lucky enough to one and etain, you're fantastic. please, please ... keep on writing.